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Elisabeth Fairchild

 

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Topic Discussed by Elisabeth Fairchild

Theme Question:  How does a writer effectively incorporate historical elements into the story to make it true to the period? 

*5 basic types of historical detail 
*Historical detail in an opening scene
*9 applications to effective historical detail

What every reader expects to find when they delve the pages of historical romance is another time, another place. From scant hint to lavish excess, the best history delving writers use historical details to deliver a true to the period time and place.

However, in addition, historical detail has the ability to enhance every other element of word crafting, to become an intrinsic element of story's warp and weft. In order to do so, historical detail must work double-time, not just world building, not just encapsulating another time period, but serving other purposes within the tale. Deftly woven, effectively written historical detail cannot be removed without tearing asunder the story's fabric.

Five basic types of historical detail include:

Backdrop Detail (Setting/season) location, or historical event against which events are set
Staging Details Props
Costume

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Language Includes slang, dialect, dialogue subject matter and tone
Social Context Establishes differences in social standards, mores, customs, etiquette, and belief systems of another time and place

Authors with the truest grasp of a period skillfully delve into all types of historical detail with the following goals in mind.

Effective historical detail can:

Historical Detail

A Build a believable world--another time and place
B Establish mood, tone, time, place, atmosphere, set the stage, and draw the reader into the fabric of the story.
C Offer a better understanding of characters through direct means or symbolic references
D Offer parallels/ mirror images for emotional elements in the story
E Symbolically deepen the impact of theme
F Offer an excellent medium for sensual writing, (enhancing the romance,) and for sensory writing (appealing to the senses of sight, smell, touch, sound, and taste.)
G Distinguish writer's voice, and style from other writers
H Provide variety and freshness to the writing
I Leave the reader feeling they understand a moment in history, and how the world has changed, better than before

The following are examples of each of the above elements using specific writing examples.

Whenever I start a book, I like to use historical detail in the opening scene, to accomplish all three of the following:

A) Build a believable world--another time and place.

B) Establish mood, tone, atmosphere, set the stage, and draw the reader into the fabric of the story.

C) Create a visual statement of theme with a parallel image or symbolic setting that suggests the main thrust of the story.

Example One
Chapter One
(London, October 30, 1820)

Excerpt from "Marriage a la Mode,"  by Elisabeth Fairchild 

"Her laughter won his attention, but it was divorce first brought them together--the Pain and Penalties proceedings--the King's attempt to dissolve his marriage to his all too licentious queen. The brass founders and coppersmiths of London would do glittering and noisy homage to their beleaguered Queen Caroline. Right down the busiest of thoroughfares to the Royal residence they marched, on this unseasonably warm fall afternoon, blocking traffic, right and left. Thousands swarmed Piccadilly to view the spectacle.

Two in particular were caught up in the press. Their carriages, headed in opposite directions, slowed to a standstill, side by side. And Melody Bainbridge was laughing, in the face of hardship, in the face of fear, in the face of a nation that made spectacle of itself and its opinions over the proposed separation of its king and queen. Her laughter won Lord Hay's attention away from the inconvenient delay and the distant blare of a brass band."


Here, (a historical event) a protest against the ill treatment of Queen Caroline as she is publicly humiliated by divorce proceedings in which the newly crowned King dragged her name and reputation through the courts, the press, and public opinion, serves as symbolic parallel to the storyline which explores the marriage and divorce laws of Regency England. The mood and tone of the story are echoed by the act of protest, as our heroine laughs in the face of her own impending divorce proceedings.

 

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